Wednesday, 9 May 2012
Thursday, 23 February 2012
Log (23/2/12)
Scene 1,
I was directing where the actors had to stand and where they had to walk. Then i cleared all the area out for the actors to walk. Then i cleared the lifts out for them to go down a floor. Then i sold the camera man to cut the film when they went into the lift. Next me and the camera man went down stairs to film the actors getting out of the lift. Then i cleared the RC floor out then we carried on the film, we followed the actors from behind. Through the gates then we cut the film
What happened in the scenes we where filming where Kam and Sam came out of prison then they walked out to the lifts talking about stealing some phones and apple macs. Then the lift came and they came in. The lift came to the RC, they walked to the gates the, they went through and Sam shouted finally where free.
I was directing where the actors had to stand and where they had to walk. Then i cleared all the area out for the actors to walk. Then i cleared the lifts out for them to go down a floor. Then i sold the camera man to cut the film when they went into the lift. Next me and the camera man went down stairs to film the actors getting out of the lift. Then i cleared the RC floor out then we carried on the film, we followed the actors from behind. Through the gates then we cut the film
What happened in the scenes we where filming where Kam and Sam came out of prison then they walked out to the lifts talking about stealing some phones and apple macs. Then the lift came and they came in. The lift came to the RC, they walked to the gates the, they went through and Sam shouted finally where free.
Thursday, 8 December 2011
Editing My Script
1. EXT.ALLEYWAY.DAY
John:
Early 20's, ragged cloths ( shirt and trousers) , very tall
Vin:
Near 27, three quarters ragged trousers, yellow dirty vest and very short.
Dip:
18 years old, new posh cloths (steels cloths ), about 7ft
Pit:
14 years old, ragged shirt and trousers, big Hench
John:
Early 20's, ragged cloths ( shirt and trousers) , very tall
Vin:
Near 27, three quarters ragged trousers, yellow dirty vest and very short.
Dip:
18 years old, new posh cloths (steels cloths ), about 7ft
Pit:
14 years old, ragged shirt and trousers, big Hench
John, Vin, Dip and Pit:
(In early 20s, ragged close)Picking pockets, don't know each other yet, 4 screens in 1 screen Split into quarters (Individually)
all 4 doing the same thing (picking pockets)
all 4 doing the same thing (picking pockets)
2. EXT.MIDDLE OF TOWN.SUNSET
All:
(Individually, all 4 screens go into 1) run in to town
(Individually, all 4 screens go into 1) run in to town
(NEXT DAY)
3. EXT.IN ALLEYWAY.DAY
ALL: (BUMP INTO EACH OTHER)
Vin:
U all pick pockets
U all pick pockets
John, Pit, Dip:
Yeah
Yeah
Vin:
shall we make a crew. We’ll be we’ll rich, u get me.
J, p, d:
Yeah, Yeah , What shall we name our self.
Yeah, Yeah , What shall we name our self.
Vin:
Picks for pick pockets.
Picks for pick pockets.
J, P, D:
That’s officially done
Vin:
every one go to sleep well start fresh tomorrow.
That’s officially done
Vin:
every one go to sleep well start fresh tomorrow.
4. INT.OLD MANSION. NIGHT
Vin:
Oi, listen lets rob this old mans house, he’s got quiet a lot of money. He’s getting his back yard re-built, truck loads of materials, must have lots of money.
John:
Na i disagree on this i am a thief but i wont go and rob a house and harm him. That's not me !!, I'm gone not part of this thing any more
Oi, listen lets rob this old mans house, he’s got quiet a lot of money. He’s getting his back yard re-built, truck loads of materials, must have lots of money.
John:
Na i disagree on this i am a thief but i wont go and rob a house and harm him. That's not me !!, I'm gone not part of this thing any more
5. EXT.OUT SIDE THE OLD MANS HOUSE. SUNSET
Vin, Dip, Pit :
( ALL GO OUT SIDE THE OLD MANS HOUSE, DRIVING SLOWLY)
Vin:
I'm afraid if John tells the police
Pit:
If he does then we'll kick the ship out of him.
Dip:
hey hey I'm ready
( ALL GO OUT SIDE THE OLD MANS HOUSE, DRIVING SLOWLY)
Vin:
I'm afraid if John tells the police
Pit:
If he does then we'll kick the ship out of him.
Dip:
hey hey I'm ready
6. EXT.STARTING TO BREAK INTO THE OLD MANS HOUSE.NIGHT
Vin, Dip, Pit :
lets go!
lets go!
(They go when the old mans gone out)
(boom)
7. INT.OLD MANS HOUSE.NIGHT
Vin:
let’s go, let’s go hurry, hurry
let’s go, let’s go hurry, hurry
(Putting expensive stuff into the black bags)
Pit:
fucking chill out
Dip:
the old man is gonna take a long time coming hear
Pit:
fucking chill out
Dip:
the old man is gonna take a long time coming hear
8. INT.JOHN’S HOUSE.NIGHT
JOHN:
(phones the police to tall of the robbers)
(phones the police to tall of the robbers)
John:
hello, can I have the police.
hello, can I have the police.
Police:
what seems to be the problem
John:
OK, I’ve seen a group of people robbing a house there in the middle of looting.
Police:
can i have your name and address
John:
my name is will and i live 31 Stoney Stanton road
OK, I’ve seen a group of people robbing a house there in the middle of looting.
Police:
can i have your name and address
John:
my name is will and i live 31 Stoney Stanton road
Police:
OK were on our way
9.EXT.OUT SIDE THE OLD MANS HOUSE. NIGHT
Police:
So we go from the back and front forcing them to retrieve. OK has every one got there riot gear on
All:
Yes
Police sheriff:
OK lets go no noise what so ever
10.EXT. SNEAK THROUGH THE WINDOWS.
MIDDLE OF NIGHT
Police:
(sneak through the window)
Sheriff:
3, 2, 1 go go go
11.INT. THE OLD MANS HOUSE. MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT
Police:
Get down!, Get down!
Vin:
What the hell is going on hear.
Police:
(grab Vin, dip, pit)
Your coming with us, where you belong
Vin:
Bloody hell
OK were on our way
9.EXT.OUT SIDE THE OLD MANS HOUSE. NIGHT
Police:
So we go from the back and front forcing them to retrieve. OK has every one got there riot gear on
All:
Yes
Police sheriff:
OK lets go no noise what so ever
10.EXT. SNEAK THROUGH THE WINDOWS.
MIDDLE OF NIGHT
Police:
(sneak through the window)
Sheriff:
3, 2, 1 go go go
11.INT. THE OLD MANS HOUSE. MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT
Police:
Get down!, Get down!
Vin:
What the hell is going on hear.
Police:
(grab Vin, dip, pit)
Your coming with us, where you belong
Vin:
Bloody hell
Thursday, 1 December 2011
My Script
1. EXT.ALYWAY.DAY
John, Vin, Dip and Pit:
Picking pockets (Indevisual)
2. EXT.MIDDLE OF TOWN.SUNSET
All: run in to town
(NEXT DAY)
3. EXT.IN ALLYWAY.DAY
ALL: (BUMP INTO EACH OTHER)
Vin: U all pick pockets
John, Pit, Dip: Yeh
Vin: shall we make a crew. We’ll be we’ll rich, u get me.
J, p, d: Yeh, Yeh , What shall we name our self.
Vin: Picks for pick pockets.
J, P, D: That’s officially done
4. INT.OLD MANSION. NIGHT
John: Oi, listen lets rob this old mans house, he’s got quiet a lot of money. He’s getting his back yard re-built, truck loads of materials, must have lots of money.
5. EXT.OUT SIDE THE OLD MANS HOUSE. SUNSET
Vin, Dip, Pit :( ALL GO OUT SIDE THE OLD MANS HOUSE, DRIVING SLOWLY)
6. EXT.STARTING TO BREAK INTO THE OLD MANS HOUSE.NIGHT
Vin, Dip, Pit : lets go!
(They go when the old mans gone out)
(boom)
7. INT.OLD MANS HOUSE.NIGHT
Vin: let’s go, let’s go hurry, hurry
(Putting expensive stuff into the black bags)
8. INT.JOHN’S HOUSE.NIGHT
JOHN: (phones the police to tall of the robbers)
John: hello, can I have the police.
Police: what seems to be the problem
John: Ok, I’ve seen a group of people robbing a house there in the middle of loting.
Police: Ok were on our way
9.EXT.OUT SIDE THE OLD MANS HOUSE. NIGHT
Police: So we go from the back and frount forcing them to retrive. Ok has every one got there riot gear on
All: Yes
10.EXT. SNEAK THROUGH THE WINDOWS. MIDDLE OF NIGHT
Police: (sneak through the window)
11.INT. THE OLD MANS HOUSE. MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT
Police: Get down!, Get down!
Vin: What the F**K is going on hear.
Police:
(grab vin, dip, pit)
Your coming with us, where you belong
9.EXT.OUT SIDE THE OLD MANS HOUSE. NIGHT
Police: So we go from the back and frount forcing them to retrive. Ok has every one got there riot gear on
All: Yes
10.EXT. SNEAK THROUGH THE WINDOWS. MIDDLE OF NIGHT
Police: (sneak through the window)
11.INT. THE OLD MANS HOUSE. MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT
Police: Get down!, Get down!
Vin: What the F**K is going on hear.
Police:
(grab vin, dip, pit)
Your coming with us, where you belong
Thursday, 10 November 2011
Character Profile
What is your character's full name? What is their preferred nickname?
My characters full name is John Smith. He hates nickname.
How old is your character throughout the majority of the story?
My character is about 14 years old but through out the ages he turns 17
What is their date of birth?
Their date of birth is 12/4/1994
What is their place of birth?
Their place where he was given birth id London
Are they male or female?
He is male
Where do they live now? Are they married, single, engaged, divorced, widowed?
They live in Birmingham. He is not married yet but has a girl friend.
Does your character have any brothers or sisters? If so, how many?
My character has no sisters and no brothers. His 1st brother died in a car crash.
What is your character's overall health like?
My character has got a dislocated shoulder.
What type of personality does your character have?
My character has a anger problem and he is not calm when some one says anything to him he kills them
What is their Ethnic background and religion?
He does not have a religion and he is a British
What is their current occupation?
He works in Tescos as a shelf stacker
What level of education does your character have?
My character has a A in maths, B in science and a A in English
What does your character like or love?
My character love girls and snickers
What does your character dislike or hate?
My character hates vegetables and cars with loud exhausts
My characters full name is John Smith. He hates nickname.
How old is your character throughout the majority of the story?
My character is about 14 years old but through out the ages he turns 17
What is their date of birth?
Their date of birth is 12/4/1994
What is their place of birth?
Their place where he was given birth id London
Are they male or female?
He is male
Where do they live now? Are they married, single, engaged, divorced, widowed?
They live in Birmingham. He is not married yet but has a girl friend.
Does your character have any brothers or sisters? If so, how many?
My character has no sisters and no brothers. His 1st brother died in a car crash.
What is your character's overall health like?
My character has got a dislocated shoulder.
What type of personality does your character have?
My character has a anger problem and he is not calm when some one says anything to him he kills them
What is their Ethnic background and religion?
He does not have a religion and he is a British
What is their current occupation?
He works in Tescos as a shelf stacker
What level of education does your character have?
My character has a A in maths, B in science and a A in English
What does your character like or love?
My character love girls and snickers
What does your character dislike or hate?
My character hates vegetables and cars with loud exhausts
Thursday, 20 October 2011
Merlin
I have downloaded the script of Merlin episode 3 and have watched 5 minutes of the episode and the video and the script are exactly the same.
The only difference was that the Merlin script was more brief and compact than the actual episode.By looking at the script and the episode this has given me an idea of how I'm gong to wright my script. It has told me t wright in small points and to get straight to the point when in writing thing down.
Script: http://www.bbc.co.uk/blogs/writersroom/2011/10/new_script_merlin_-_the_wicked.shtml
Merlin episode: http://www.bbc.co.uk/iplayer/episode/b01692qr/Merlin_Series_4_The_Wicked_Day/
The only difference was that the Merlin script was more brief and compact than the actual episode.By looking at the script and the episode this has given me an idea of how I'm gong to wright my script. It has told me t wright in small points and to get straight to the point when in writing thing down.
Script: http://www.bbc.co.uk/blogs/writersroom/2011/10/new_script_merlin_-_the_wicked.shtml
Merlin episode: http://www.bbc.co.uk/iplayer/episode/b01692qr/Merlin_Series_4_The_Wicked_Day/
Thursday, 6 October 2011
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