In this film 4 main characters. John, Vin, Dip and Pit. They pick pockets indivisualy for a living.(they don't know each other yet).One day the all bump it to each other and make a crew.After months and months Dip is the stupid one out the 4 decides to rob a old mans house.
John the leader out of the lot has a debate with the hole crew, he decides to say no to the idea. The rest of the three plan for days (go to the mans house to see the main entrances). One day they decide to go and rob the house. While the go in to the house and are half way between picking the stuff and putting it in the black bags.
Jhon knows that they are robbing the house so he calls the police. The police are out side the house armed with guns and armer. The three are armed with nothing. they panic alot. John calls Vin up to say that he put them in to this mess.The police slowly creap in to the back window that the three opened and they all have a fight.They get arrested.
This is a good start Zahaib. Next you need to break your treatment down into scenes. Each scene needs to have a heading like the headings you can see on my Blogger post.
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